Your poem is not successfully end. So i think that you have to do it completely end. Your thinking is very nice without any doubt. But i hope next time you can take care your writing. Thanking you
I'm sorry to say bro, I think you don't have any idea about haiku.. It is a haiku example:
An old silent pond...
A frog jumps into the pond,
splash! Silence again.
5/7/5 syllable
thank you so much ..
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